I would also suggest a longer agiel but this is a lovely sketch.
Should there not also be the sun/moon logo?

Thanks for the comment anaesthetic I think the only reason I went with a shorter agiel is that after reading about
what Denna did to Richard, it eases the mind abit to imagine it a little smaller
And as for the sun/moon logo, when I drew this I was sure about the whole copyright thing and if it would be ok to
make it so obvious this was Cara. After all, Anne McCaffrey persecutes those who draw her stuff. Maybe I'll add
the logo in now that I've learned Terry supports fan art.

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love the pic...

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Showing love for my Mord Sith.

Her arms seem too short though.

I'm working on one of Berdine and Raina again, you should check it out in my scraps.

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I think the head is much too big. At first it seems to me as if the head doesn’t fit to the rest of the body. The expression of the face is nice.
For me the body properties could be much better. For example: The arms and the hands don’t really fit together, because the arms look to short in front of the arms.

this is awesome, one of my favorite characters in the books.

Thanks for the the comment Adlerlrene. Now that it's been quiet awhile since drawing the picture, I find it easier to see what other people do about misproportion on this one. It is definately though, a matter of shading. The drawing had a real life photo model and as for the overall shape, size, and proportions... I'm right on the mark. The problem is that the photo was from slightly above perhaps which adds to the larger head people are getting at. The rest is totally a matter of not enough shadow. Had I done it properly, it would make it easier to see that the head is closer to the camera and the feet farther away. I mentioned something about this in the description I believe. Thanks for taking the time to point things out... best wishes

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Thanks Alisea! She's definately my favorite Love your signature by the way

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