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Original Character from my "Cauldron of Creation" story World
Name: Lillian "Lilly" PC-8302 Rank and Affiliation: Personal Consort Cyborg. Crew member of the ship "Clairvouyant". Unofficial LEG soldier of the Nomad Earth Empire. Race: Cyborg Age: 6 Height: 5ft4inch - 162.56cm Weight: 110lbs - 49.89kg Powers: Does not possess any magical powers. Primary function is to provide companionship and sexual pleasure in service to the Captain. Lilly has her own unique personality and is considered practically human by the crew. She is capable of learning new skills just as humans do and is unique among her kind because of it. Captain Carter's family wealth is responsible for this highly advanced modification. Lilly is also Skilled at hand to hand combat, firearms, vehicles, and first aid. Lilly has charisma that makes her fun to be around and she always has something to say that's perfect for the moment. Weaknesses: Lilly only has a collective 6 years of experience compared to humans having their entire lifetime to base decisions upon. All her memories and knowledge were either preprogrammed or learned in her 6 years of existence which sometimes leads to her not understanding situations that occur for the first time. Also many concepts that are theoretical in essence escape her. More about Lilly: She has a fascination with music which makes for interesting moments as she is able to stream, create, and play it through her mechanical body. She sometimes begins singing or playing music just to set the mood or to respond to certain things and while it can be comical, she's very skilled and the crew appreciate her abilities. About the Art Photoshop CS4 with my Wacom Cintiq. References used: space images, textures for shirt, many badges researched to create her "wings" badge. More of the Crew of the Clairvouyant: Captain Katyah Carter Sergent Veronika Winters Corporal Charlie Fresno Specialist Garret Gunner EDIT: I've made some changes to reflect the critique I've been so lucky to receive. Thanks for the help you guys!  Visit this [link] to see the before and after!Thanks for comments and  s if you enjoy it! Comments Thanks brotha
 Damn you was quick with the comment today I just put it up!-- Metroid Fan - Check out my Metroid Fanart  Awesomeness is thy name!
^_^ So, this is the PCC, nice, very nice. I definitely like the design  -- I want to runaway, and leave it all behind. Dissapear, get you out of my mind, so i can feel alive again. No thinking about you, swear this is the last time, never again  fwaaaah I want a personal consort cyborg giggady
Thanks bro
I'm glad you like it man. I had a good time with her... painting her I mean...-- Metroid Fan - Check out my Metroid Fanart I'm sure you did have a good time XD Rofl
You still manage to amaze me with the colors in your artwork dude! Is that a stud in her chin? -- I want to runaway, and leave it all behind. Dissapear, get you out of my mind, so i can feel alive again. No thinking about you, swear this is the last time, never again Aye it IS a labret piercing
She has a fascination with poking holes in herself too it seems  -- Metroid Fan - Check out my Metroid Fanart Woot! I knew it!
^_^ Hmmm if only she was real, I'd poke a hole...I mean pierce!...oop, i mean...ah hell XD lool -- I want to runaway, and leave it all behind. Dissapear, get you out of my mind, so i can feel alive again. No thinking about you, swear this is the last time, never again |
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The area around the eyes mostly could use more definition to make them seem less watery and sad. You said in her bio she is a smart and intelligent person that is fun to be around, and making her eyes more clear i think would help portray that.
The background nebula, feels a little chunky and thus a little mismatched since it is supposed to be a background element. With her face having less detail in texture than the BG, it made me look less at the face and more at it.
I really do love the texture and the way is stretches on her shirt, and the texture on her badge as well. I think getting the other areas to this same level of texture would make the piece overall more united.
Great job with overall color and feel though! Can't wait to see more! You just keep getting better and better!
At first, it´s a wonderful warm/cold lightning and mood. You have in the very second you look at that picture the information that she is in a spaceship, even if the background is kept simple and stylish. that is always a win for a well executed illustration.
The fabric of her shirt is awesome, the folds are top notch placed. There are three small things that bother me a little bit:
1st the head is a bit too large.Then, I miss some sharp lines/texture in her skin and single strands of hair/single hair to keep the same texture standard like her shirt and the logo on it has.
The 3rd thing is that I am not sure if there is the cushion from the back rest (is it called like this?) is infront of her, or is she infront of the cushion - the shadows seem a little odd there. if she is pressed in the cushions I would add some orange light on the (viewer´s side) right part to make it stand out.
I hope I could explain that right so that it is understandable!
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